A point raised in my feedback was that my title wasn't overly effective and didn't suit the genre of horror, so I have changed how the title looks completely. I have given it a script font, a mysterious glow and a slow fading in and out effect so that it appears slowly on the screen. This image doesn't really do the title justice as you need to see it with the effects, but I'm a lot more satisfied with the result.
It was also brought up (by nearly everyone) that my titles in between the boy counting were too long and didn't work without any sound. So to correct this sizable problem, I have cut out some of the titles and will be slotting them elsewhere in my opening sequence (not sure where yet though). I now have the boy counting while the titles are playing so that the audience don't loose interest and it still manages to build up tension.
The final thing that I have done is to change another one of my titles. I have made the word blue in 'Blue Steel Media' blue, and the rest of the font in a grey to make it link more closely to steel. I have also added in an effect to make it look slightly more interesting and professional, but you can't see this very clearly from the screen shot .
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