Editing Day- 3

Toady I have just added on the last remaining shots to the opening sequence and have also put on the little sister singing the nursery rhyme at the beginning. At the moment I'm not to sure whether it's obvious to the audience why there is a nursery rhyme playing and I could probably also do with fading it in and out better.

When I next come to edit I am going to change the order that the titles appear. The main way that I'm going to do this is by breaking up the shot of the brother counting, so that every two seconds it cuts to a title. I think I may make the cuts more frequent by the time he gets to 'six' by having it cut every one second in hope of building up tension. 


Fingers crossed that this will be effective!