Today in the lesson the class looked at each others opening sequences, to see how successful we have been so far and how we can all make improvements. These are the comments that I recieved from those in my class:
• Sometimes the voices are little too quite. Cut the man saying 'Found you'.
• I don't really like it being so silent at the beginning , maybe add something to keep us interested.
• Great storyline...love the backing track... a tad dark in areas...love the actress.
• Nice title order...good use of different shots...genuinely scared me!
•Unsure of some of the textures on the production companies etc...unsure of order of titles...good use of different shots.
• Could made title fade in and out...very good!
• Make the names of the actors show for slightly longer...the backing track could have gone quietly through the counting bit, other wise the titles are slightly akward.
• Keep titles on longer?
• Maybe have the counting continued whilst the titles are playing?...sound is very good :)
• No sound on titles?...story line and genre developed well.
So once again I have recieved a mixture of feedback. The main focus seems to be on changing the order/length of my titles as well as changing the duration of the backing track; possibly adding some music aswell. So I now have an awful lot of changes that I need to be getting on with! YAY....
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